Issue 34, Spring '13

Lizzie Flashes: Daphne

by Lizzie Stark 09.29.2009

flash_ftHere’s my response to last week’s Meta Exercise. Since Julio Cortázar used a narrative piece of art, a novel, to construct his excellent short short. I thought I’d give myself a challenge and try to do the same thing with a less experiential sort of art, in this case, sculpture. Points to anyone who can identify the sculptor.


Daphne

Inside the museum, she allowed herself to be politely interested in the art, the pale statues he loved so much, David twisting back his arm, a grim set to his mouth, Poseidon’s hand against Persephone’s thigh, hands sunk into the cool marble as if it were a marshmallow. He had arranged for this private trip to the museum; he had paid for their first class plane tickets to Rome, but that was to be expected.dafne

At first, she’d found his attentions in the bar where she worked flattering but overwhelming. His lavish words and gifts masked a paucity of spirit, a blindness, an inability to admire things for anything more than the surface.

At his request, their guide left them in a small room at one corner of the museum. He had wanted to look at a particular sculpture, by themselves, in the quiet. Her boredom faded as she stood beside him, studying it. The sculptor caught two lovers in a moment of passion. He reached out, determined to hold her in his arms, cape blown back by the breeze. She, her hair flying, stood perched on a precipice, hands stretched up, fingers and toes already sprouting leaves, bark snaking up her waist.

In the museum, he stepped behind her, one hand slipping toward her waist, and she turned her head back toward him, open-mouthed, silent, lost.

Cross posted at LizzieStark.com
Lizzie Stark

Lizzie Stark

Editor-in-Chief

Lizzie Stark is a founding editor of Fringe, and the author of Leaving Mundania (Chicago Review Press, 2012), a narrative nonfiction book about the subculture of live-action role-playing, or larp. Her freelance journalism and writing has appeared in The Philadelphia Inquirer, io9, The Daily Beast, and elsewhere. She holds an MFA in fiction writing from Emerson College, and an MS in journalism from Columbia University. She blogs at LizzieStark.com.


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  • george wiseman Thursday, October 1, 2009 at 1:04 pm

    Appreciate the way the confinement and blank confusion of a stagnant relationship was captured here. And the added depth of the shared moment; that in itself it was not enough to bring the two lovers together, makes it a little more painful. Had a similar sort of anti-epiphany involving an ex and interpol. lol.

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